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A Long Time Ago 32 by Hammelherd A Long Time Ago 32 by Hammelherd
This is the last page of chapter 3. Lazy, lazy coloring, but as any of you who read my journals know, I have been really sick. That's why this page took so long- I've spent a lot of time sleeping for the past week. But anyways, the first of chapter four are inked and ready to go now, so keep an eye out for those in the next few days! :D

Also, thank you everyone who sent me "get well" wishes. You are all the best, and I love you.

So, in regards to the comic- the "mushy stuff" that the Once-ler left out was the stuff in the description of the last page. I thought some of you might take it to mean something a little more ah... adult themed. It wasn't, sorry. But you can look forward to a little of that in the next chapter ;) (if you don't mind spoilers, you can read my outline of that scene here.
Anyways, expect the first page of chapter four soon, and maybe also another short story. We'll see how I feel tomorrow.

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ArtFanJa55 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
uh oh.
sampea Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Yes...uh oh.
TheThunderART Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cute <3
humanpeteriscool Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Second to last panel: PERVY ONCIE. Or that's what it looks like.
Hammelherd Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Haha, I'm afraid of what that looks like. The fandom isn't ready for his "come hither" face yet, I don't think.
00tomboy00 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
"leave out the mushy stuff"
"believe me, I did"

*died laughing*
Herz-aus-Eisen Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=P ya know, I normally don't like fan fictions or anything of the sort....but I actually enjoy reading this one :la: keep up the good work
Hammelherd Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
Thank you! That's awesome. I know what you mean, sometimes I really don't like fanfiction either, but I noticed what I usually don't like about it is if it seems unrealistic or out of character, so I try really hard to make mine seem as if it could be canon.
livil00lah Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant! :D

So, is Norma supposed to be in college? (I think Oncie was supposed to be in his early twenties in the film as he left home to seek his fortune...)
Hammelherd Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012
Yeah, she's about eighteen or nineteen in my interpretation. I figured that they're probably only a few years apart in age in the movie (I account her weight and lack of teeth to the bad nutrition of food without organic matter in it)so I put her at early college age when my story opens. Maybe just graduating high school, but that's the absolute youngest.
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